Account of Editing
We began by sorting all our clips into files, naming them
'good' and 'bad', in order to narrow down our selection of clips. We sectioned
into ‘bad’ all the clips that we knew wouldn’t be at all appropriate due to
composition of shots, but also kept some that were not perfect for the ‘good’
file so we could have options if we needed them. After placing all the
desirable clips in the ‘good’ file, we created more files within to organise
the selection of shots into scenes, such as ‘container’, ‘car’ and ‘raid’, so
as to save time when looking for clips.
After having sorted all our clips into files and sub-files
in order for easier access and faster decision-making, we chose our first clip
to be the Jeep arriving at the container. We liked the fact that we could hear
the engine before the car appeared because it built tension, which we felt was
important for a thriller. It also created an impact so we thought it would be
good to start with to really set up the scene for the audience. Before having
Ted open the container, we wanted to somehow introduce the theme of drugs, so
we used a close up of Ollie’s hands making lines with the drugs. We found that
not only did this introduce the theme quickly, it also created a sense of
mystery because the audience didn’t yet know whose hands they were supposed to
be.
We decided to begin the container scene with a clip of Ted
opening the container from inside. This was to give a view from Ollie’s
perspective because the change from dark to light gave Ted a sense of power
creating a binary fission between Ollie and Ted in terms of age. We had
difficulties using the full clip, however, because it slowed the pace of the
action too much but also there was a clunking sound when Ted lowered the ramp.
It looked clumsy and quite comical as it made Ted look undignified, which is
exactly what we didn’t want because we wanted the audience to think of him as
superior and feared as well as admired by his employees. We tried cutting the
clip with a wide shot of Ollie looking up, which we found worked because it
showed that Ollie had acknowledged Ted’s arrival as well as showing the
audience the interior of the container and therefore informing them more about
the world of these criminals.
We experimented with close ups of the police sergeants, with
one bringing food to his mouth and the other doing the same with a coffee
flask. We initially thought we might have been able to use them to set the
police scene as well as giving police a negative representation by portraying
them as lazy, but we then decided the clips looked too comical and wouldn’t
have created the effect we wanted.
We felt that we should try to push the tension even further
by beginning the entire video with a shot of the sergeants in the car to create
the sense throughout the sequence with the gang that they’re being watched. We
stopped sticking to the timeline as we found that we could make it more
impactful by going with what we felt because of seeing how the clips looked in
real life.
We initially kept the scene in the container separated from scenes
the police being ordered to go in but then, in order to heighten the action, we
used cross-cutting between the action in the container and the police
constables sneaking around in order to really engage the audience by anticipating
an attack and making the audience worry for the gang and want them gang to
leave the container. We were very happy with this change as it created a much
more anti-climax when the police opened the wrong container but it also created
a lot more suspense, which made it much more exciting and also gave the
audience a chance to connect with the gang by making them worry for them.
We had a clip where one of the sergeants picked up a
Walkie-talkie and shouted ‘go-go-go’ but we decided it didn’t sit right with
the tension we had managed to build so we simply used a medium shot of one
sergeant noticing a disturbance and then cut to more action happening in the
container, followed by more shots of the police constables moving for an
attack.
We used a shot of the police constables sneak up to the
container for behind them the time it took between them entering the shot and
actually opening the door was too long and it undid the exciting tension that
had just been building up which we thought would be disastrous for our
thriller. We tried increasing the speed of the shot and found that it helped.
However, there was a strange blurry affect in the movement by speeding it up.
We tried not using that shot and just using a shot from the inside of them
opening the container and found that this worked much better than we thought it
would because it was a lot more impactful than if we had seen them approaching
the container. In terms of continuity, it worked better anyway because we
hadn’t previously seen the gang shut the container.
When editing the shot of the police from the front of the
container where the deception is revealed, we cut it too soon and didn’t allow
enough time for the audience to take in the twist before the head of police
reacted by hitting the door. We extended the pause in that shot before the
reaction and learned that the smallest amounts of time can make all the
difference to the impact created on screen.
During the editing process, I focused on the order of the
shots and on trying to create a narrative, which featured the gang and the
police equally in terms of perspective. My role was to make sure we used enough
clips and give the right amount of screen time to the police and the gang, as
well as keeping an eye on continuity. We worked well as a group since I would
focus on us using the right clips, others focused in cleaning up the sound,
adjusting the pace, inspecting the progress and finding effective non-diegetic
sounds to enhance our thriller.
I enjoyed editing because I learned a lot about how much
timing contributes to the effect created by a film. It made me realise just how
significant each moment is in setting a pace or having an impact and taught me
what makes successful films meet their standards. Making the shots in the
cross-section shorter made all the difference to whether any tension was
created in the film, and the longer clips in the beginning helped to establish
the characters and the situation as well as create a contrast with the faster
cuts, thus making the video more engaging.
It was also fun to see how different shots, which weren’t
designed to fit together conveniently, do so and add a comical effect. For
instance, we had a close up of a sergeant looking forward and nodding before
twitching his mouth and we also had a medium wide shot of him conveniently
twitching his mouth again before clocking the gang situation and saying ‘hang
on’. It was satisfying to cut the two scenes together at the twitch because of
how he had conveniently done it twice, but it was also a very good cut because
it showed one moment of him being certain and looking in control of the
situation and connected nicely with him suddenly realising something is wrong.
Software: Final Cut Pro
